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Sample quick roast (real format)
This is the exact style I deliver: concise, specific, and conversion-first. No fluff.
Site sample: B2B SaaS landing page
Primary leak: Hero headline says what the product is, but not who it is for + outcome by timeframe.
Current: “AI-powered platform for modern teams.”
Fix: “Cut support ticket response time by 32% in 14 days — without hiring.”
3 high-impact fixes shipped in the roast
- Message match: Rewrite hero + subhead around audience and measurable outcome.
- Trust stack: Move proof (logos, metric, customer quote) directly under CTA.
- CTA friction: Replace generic “Get started” with one concrete next step and expected effort/time.
What you get for US$1 (~HKD 8) beta
- 8–12 bullet quick roast
- Top 3 conversion leaks prioritized
- 1 rewritten hero or CTA example
- 24h turnaround
- Refund if it’s not useful
- Short intake after payment, no call required
Continue to secure US$1 checkout
Secure Stripe checkout, one-time payment, no subscription. After payment, you’re redirected to a short intake so fulfillment starts immediately.
What happens right after payment
- You land on a short intake form and paste your site URL.
- You can add any context like traffic source, audience, or current conversion problem.
- I send the roast by email within 24 hours, usually sooner.
Best fit: founders with a live landing page and a clear action they want more people to take.
Before you buy
- This is a concise teardown, not a full redesign or custom build.
- You do not need to book a call.
- If your page is not live yet, wait until it is, the feedback will be sharper.